Describe the famous cathedral in my country.

2022-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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Myeongdong cathedral is the most famous cathedral. It is in Seoul. It was built in 1892. But, I have never been there. Many weddings are held in Myeongdong Cathedral. Especially famous people do it a lot.

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Hi, Emily! I am sure that this cathedral is huge and has great architectural design. Thank you for the information!-Faith-

Myeongdong cathedral is the most famous cathedral.

>> Myeongdong cathedral is the most famous cathedral in Korea.
It is in Seoul.

>> CORRECT

OR It is located in Seoul.

It was built in 1892.

>> CORRECT
But, I have never been there.

>> CORRECT
Many weddings are held in Myeongdong Cathedral. Especially famous people do it a lot.

>> Many weddings are held in Myeongdong Cathedral especially famous people.

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