Describe the first memory you have of going to school

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Here are my corrections for you:

When I was young, maybe I felt very thrilled and excited.

>> CORRECT!
all of thing is firsted to me. such as read a study book, play with the friend. and then follow the rules of school.

>> Everything was a first for me, such as reading to study a book, or playing with a friend, and following the school rules.

when I comback home, I tell my mother what happened that day (during the school)

>> When I get home, I tell my mother about what happened on that day.