Describe the first memory you have of going to school.(ANSWER)

2018-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I get up early and I prepared for school. I want to go to school with my mom, but my mom has to care my younger sister. So, I went to go to school alone. It was lonely day. I anticipationed that my mom is waiting for me when the school ends. And, I went out. But there was other friends parents, not my mom. I think I cried when I arrived home. -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

 

Describe the first memory you have of going to school.

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I get up early and I prepared for school.
I want to go to school with my mom, but my mom has to care my younger sister.
So, I went to go to school alone.
It was lonely day.
I anticipationed that my mom is waiting for me when the school ends.
And, I went out. But there was other friends parents, not my mom.
I think I cried when I arrived home.

 

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

I got up early and I prepared for school.
I want to go to school with my mom, but my mom
had to care for my younger sister.
So, I went to school alone.
It was
a lonely day.
I was anticipating that my mom was waiting for me when the school ends.
Then, I went out. There were other friends, parents, but not my mom.
I think
I cried when I arrived home.

 

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

See you in our class. J

 

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