Describe the first memory you have of going to school.(ANSWER)
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HOMEWORK:
Describe the first memory you have of going to school.
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I get up early and I prepared for school.
I want to go to school with my mom, but my mom has to care my younger
sister.
So, I went to go to school alone.
It was lonely day.
I anticipationed that my mom is waiting for me when the school ends.
And, I went out. But there was other friends parents, not my mom.
I think I cried when I arrived home.
CORRECTIONS:
I got up early and I prepared for school.
I want to go to school with my mom, but my mom had to care for my younger sister.
So, I went to school alone.
It was a lonely day.
I was anticipating
that my
mom was waiting for me when the
school ends.
Then, I went out. There were other friends, parents, but not my mom.
I think I cried when I arrived home.
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J Please take note of the corrections. ^^
See you in our class. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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