Describe the important of the ocean to human life. How does it prodive food,jobs and transportation.
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I think the ocean is prodive is very important because ocean is prodive the many seafood and water.
And ocean is prodive the made ship and boat.
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Hi Jimmy!
This is your second revised composition for today. You can see the corrected version below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Describe the important of the ocean to human life. How does it prodive food,jobs and transportation?
I think the ocean is prodive is very important because ocean is prodive the many seafood and water.
>>> I think the ocean is very important because it provides seafood and water.
>>> OR: I believe the ocean is very important because it provides us with seafood and fresh water.
And ocean is prodive the made ship and boat.
>>> The ocean also provides materials to make ships and boats.
>>> OR: The ocean is important because it allows ships and boats to travel.
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