Describe the most important relationship in your life.
학생이 쓴 원문
The most important relationship in my life is the relationship with my family. I strongly believe the saying that when my home is harmonious, all goes well. So I’m sure if I have a good relationship with my family, I will be able to have good relationships with anybody that I meet. To have a good relationship with my family, I do my best to have a good time with my family and try to tell them everything. And also I ask them to tell me openly. So far, we have had many problems, but we have solved them in wise ways through the frank conversation. I wish I build up my relationships with others on the basis of my family.
강사 첨삭
All human beings crave for and certainly need social contacts. Relationships are very important to humans, whatever age, whatever nationality, whichever sex. Without relationships, life is empty, boring and lonely. With, relationships, lives are fun, fulfilling and sometimes stressful. Relationships are rewarding, but a struggle too, hence giving many headaches to a person. Hahaha! Anyway, I believe that we can have good relationships that we want as long as we do our part to nurture and maintain them.
-Teacher Chloe
The most important relationship in my life is the relationship with my family.
>>The most important relationship in my life is the one that I have with my family.
>>The most important relationship in my life is the relationship I hav with my family.
I strongly believe the saying that when my home is harmonious, all goes well.
>>I strongly believe that when a home is harmonious, all goes well.
So Im sure if I have a good relationship with my family, I will be able to have good relationships with anybody that I meet.
>>So, I am sure that when I have a good relationship with my family, I will be able to make good relationhips with others too.
To have a good relationship with my family, I do my best to have a good time with my family and try to tell them everything.
>>To have a good relationship with my family, I do my best to have a good time with them and try to tell them everything.
And also I ask them to tell me openly.
>>Also, I ask them to be open to me.
So far, we have had many problems, but we have solved them in wise ways through the frank conversation.
>>So far, we have been through a lot of problems and we were able to solve them wisely.
I wish I build up my relationships with others on the basis of my family.
>>I wish I can build relationships just like what I have with my family.
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