Describe the most memorable day you had last week.
학생이 쓴 원문
Last week, I met my family include my brother\'s family.
My brother live in Philippines, so I hardly meet them.
I felt that my nephew and nieces grew up.
They were more calmed than the past.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
Last week, I met my family include my brother\'s family.
>> Last week, I met my family, including my brother\'s family.
My brother live in Philippines, so I hardly meet them.
>> My brother lives in the Philippines, so I hardly get to see them.
I felt that my nephew and nieces grew up.
>> I noticed that my nephew and nieces had grown up.
They were more calmed than the past.
>> They were calmer than before.
>> Last week, I met my family, including my brother\'s family.
My brother live in Philippines, so I hardly meet them.
>> My brother lives in the Philippines, so I hardly get to see them.
I felt that my nephew and nieces grew up.
>> I noticed that my nephew and nieces had grown up.
They were more calmed than the past.
>> They were calmer than before.
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