Describe the nightlife in a city you are familiar with.

Today's homework is very familiar with me. haha:) To say about my nightlife, First of all, I enjoy drinking with my friends! I love drink and move. So I open enjoy it if my pocket is enough.^^ And I also like going to noraebang(singing room). Actually singing room is secondary place after drinking haha. Sometimes I went bowling or pool. It is also possible when I have a money. In the future, I want to go club!!! I have never been there. Because I am a bad dancer.ㅠㅠ It is very sad story...

Hi [이름]! How are you today? I was so surprised when I read the content of your  homework. kk. It reminds me of my cousins who love night life. Those people who are so called, \"happy go lucky\". But, I am sure you are not a happy go lucky person because I know that you are serious about your studies. Piece of advise; Do not expose yourself too much on night life. Remember, it is not safe to go outside late at night. You have to know your limitations, okay. I hope you will consider my advise. :)   Anyway, let us talk about your sentence construction. You made good sentences but you committed some grammatical errors. I hope that my corrections could be of help to you. Please study those. Thank you [이름].   Take care always and I will see you in our class.   ~~Teacher Kris   Today\'s homework is very familiar with me. haha:) >> Today\'s homework is very familiar to me. haha:) To say about my nightlife, First of all, I enjoy drinking with my friends! >> To tell you about my nightlife, First of all, I enjoy drinking with my friends!I love drink and move. >> I love yo drink and to roam around.So I open enjoy it if my pocket is enough.^^ >> So, enjoy a lot if my pocket is enough. ^^And I also like going to noraebang(singing room). >> CorrectActually singing room is secondary place after drinking haha. >> Actually singing room is a secondary place after drinking. haha.Sometimes I went bowling or pool. >> Sometimes, I go bowling or pooling/playing billiards. It is also possible when I have a money. >> CorrectIn the future, I want to go club!!! I have never been there. >> In the future, I want to go to the club!!! I have never been there. Because I am a bad dancer.ㅠㅠ It is very sad story... >> Correct