Describe the perfect employee whom the employer will never fire
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in my opinion, there is no perfect employee. there is just an employee who tries to do his best to be perfect. I think to be a perfect employee, definitely, try to be professional in his working part and have to get the ability to control hos emotion for job
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in my opinion, there is no perfect employee.
>> CORRECT!
there is just an employee who tries to do his best to be perfect.
>> CORRECT!
I think to be a perfect employee, definitely, try to be professional in his working part and have to get the ability to control hos emotion for job.
>> I think to be a perfect employee, a person has to definitely try to work professionally and get the ability to control his emotions while working.
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