describe the period which interested in

Hello So [이름]!  Thanks for sending your composition!  I don\'t know the movie Ping Phong.  Is it like King Kong?  ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

If i go in a time machine, i would like to go back to the jurassic period.

>>> If I have a time machine, I would like to go back to the Jurassic period.

>>> If I can go back in time through a time machine, I would like to go back to the Jurassic period.   

What i find fascinating about this period is the legends and dinosaurs which I learned from history and people.
>>>  What I find fascinating about this period ARE the legends  of dinosaurs that I learned from history and heard from stories of other people. 

>>> I find the stories of dinosaurs fascinating. I have read about them from the books and have heard stories from other people.  
 First of all, I think that this period was huge empire because so many animals were living together.

>>> I consider that period as a time of the dinosaur empire because of the so many animals living together.    

Especially , the dinosaurs are huge animal that usually have big teeth .

>>> I know dinosaurs are giant animals with huge set of teeth.     

Now these animals are totally disappeared because of meteorite impact and volcano.

>>>  According to history, these huge animals disappeared because of meteorites and volcanic eruptions that destroyed the surface of the earth.  

There was a dust pact and cloud and volcanoes dust in the sky after the meteorite impact and volcano erupted.

>>> First, the meteorites rained on the earth and their impact caused massive volcanic eruptions and toxic dust clouds.    

As a result , the sunlight was blocked and so there was nothing to eat.

>>> This cloud blocked the sunlight and everything turned dark resulting to plants dying. There was nothing left to eat.    

This is why dinosaurs disappeared long time ago.
>>> This is the reason why dinosaurs became extinct   a long time ago.  
Secondly,I hope that i want to see these animals with my baby .

>>> Another reason why I want to go back to that time is I want to witness that period with my baby.   

Did you watch Pink Phong?

>>> Correct.   

My baby really like this animation including dinosauurs and huge animals.

>>> My baby really loves watching this animation show because of the dinosaur characters and other giant animals.   

This animation serve no direct education purpose but me and my baby can enjoy watching this animation together

>>> This animation serves no direct educational purpose but my baby and I do enjoy watching it together.