Describe the summer season in your city.
학생이 쓴 원문
My city is very hot, I want to go to the Waterpark or water pool.
But, I\'m summer vacation going to the pool.
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Here\'s your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good evening there!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Describe the summer season in your city.
My city is very hot, I want to go to the Waterpark or water pool.
But, I\'m summer vacation going to the pool.
>>> It\'s really hot in my city, so I want to go to a water park or pool. Luckily, I\'m planning to visit the pool during summer vacation.
>>> OR: With the heat in my city, I’d love to cool off at a water park or swimming pool. Good thing I’ve got a pool trip planned for summer break.
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