Describe the world 100 years from now. Describe how people live, and new inventions and also the thi
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The first thing that I can think of changing is shopping behavior of ordinary customers. It’s already changing form traditional shops to online shopping malls in many countries. Take Korea for example, people living in here can order not only groceries through the Internet but also other daily necessities including detergents, clothes and even large appliances. Besides, many industries began making refrigerators that have pad attached to them. It lets people know that they are out of some ingredients that they usually have and helps them to put orders right away when they touch specific button. Probably in the future, People will just say things wherever they are when they need some products. On the other hand, in my opinion, thing that will never change is school. They can learn about how to be friends with others, how to make rules, how to follow them, and sometimes how to be themselves.It is necessary for humans to interact with other people so I believe schools will always be there
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Hi [이름]! Thanks for catching up with your homework. I really appreciate the consistency and the effort. ^ ^
Nice thoughts you have here. There are numerous things that may happen a 100 years from now. Advanced technology, medicine, AI\'s and robots. Some may make our lives more convenient but of course we don\'t know the adverse effects to our environment. ^ ^
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The first thing that I can think of changing is shopping behavior of
ordinary customers.
>>The first change I can think of is the shopping ways of ordinary customers.
It’s already changing form traditional shops to
online shopping malls in many countries.
>>The change has already started from traditional shopping to online shopping in many countries.
Take Korea for example, people
living in here can order not only groceries through the Internet but
also other daily necessities including detergents, clothes and even
large appliances.
>>CORRECT
Besides, many industries began making refrigerators
that have pad attached to them.
>>CORRECT (*pads)
It lets people know that they are out of
some ingredients that they usually have and helps them to put orders
right away when they touch specific button.
>>CORRECT
Probably in the future,
People will just say things wherever they are when they need some
products.
>>CORRECT
On the other hand, in my opinion, thing that will never change
is school.
>>CORRECT (*the thing...)
They can learn about how to be friends with others, how to
make rules, how to follow them, and sometimes how to be themselves.
>>CORRECT
It is
necessary for humans to interact with other people so I believe schools
will always be there.
>>CORRECT
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