Describe the world 100 years from now. Describe how people live, new inventions, and also the thing
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After 100 years from now, there will be a lot of machines in world. People will move to Mars and find new job in there. Also, People will invent Anti-aging technology so they can live in more long time than now. But Our mind like being passionate and respecting others will not change.
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Hello, Betty!
I hope I can afford the anti-aging device when it comes out. For now, we can use deepfake technology to appear younger... Hahaha >.<
Chammy
After 100 years from now, there will be a lot of machines in world.
>> After 100 years from now, there will be a lot of machines in the world.
People will move to Mars and find new job in there.
>> People will move to Mars and find new jobs there.
Also, People will invent Anti-aging technology so they can live in more long time than now.
>> Also, people will invent Anti-aging technology so they can live longer than they do now.
But Our mind like being passionate and respecting others will not change.
>> But our passionate minds and respect for others will not change.
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