Describe the worst trip you ever took. Where did you go? What made it a bad trip?
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Every traveling that I took was good. But, If I should the worst trip, I would say my Asan traveling. Asan is one of province of Korea and it is my friend\'s hometown. When I was in gap year, I and my friends planned to travel to visit each hometown of us. Asan was one of them. I really enjoyed that traveling, but the reason I pick this memory as my worst trip is only because of hot weather. When we visited Asan, it was so hot. Also, We walked a lot because there wasn\'t enough public transportation. As I really hate hot weather, I would choose that traveling as my worst trip.
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Every traveling that I took was good.
>> CORRECT!
But, If I should the worst trip, I would say my Asan traveling.
>> But, If I should choose the worst trip, it would be my trip to Asan.
Asan is one of province of Korea and it is my friend\'s hometown.
>> Asan is one of the provinces of Korea and it is my friend\'s hometown.
When I was in gap year, I and my friends planned to travel to visit each hometown of us. Asan was one of them.
>> When I was in a gap year, my friends and I planned to travel and visit each other\'s hometown. Asan was one of them.
I really enjoyed that traveling, but the reason I pick this memory as my worst trip is only because of hot weather.
>> I really enjoyed that trip, but the reason I picked it as my worst trip was only because of its hot weather.
When we visited Asan, it was so hot.
>> CORRECT!
Also, We walked a lot because there wasn\'t enough public transportation.
>> Also, we walked a lot because there wasn\'t enough public transportation.
As I really hate hot weather, I would choose that traveling as my worst trip.
>> As I really hate hot weather, I would choose that trip as my worst trip.
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