Describe to me your dream house.( Where is it located)
학생이 쓴 원문
My dream house is tiny house. Because if I trace from my parents, I don\'t need to live in big house. It is located near by forest. My dream house is made with wood, and they\'re have a mood light in the house. And I want the house inside feeling is cozy.
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I\'ve read your homework and I\'ve noticed that you often forget to include your articles \"a, the\", This is important because it identifies your noun.
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My dream house is tiny house.
>>> My dream house is a tiny house.
Because if I trace from my parents, I don\'t need to live in big house.
>>> Because if I trace from my parents, I don\'t need to live in a big house.
It is located nearby forest.
>> It is located nearby the forest.
My dream house is made with wood, and they\'re have a mood light in the house.
>>> My dream house would be made of wood, and it will have a mood light in the house.
And I want the house inside feeling is cozy.
>>> I want a cozy feeling inside the house.
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