Describe traditional Korean art.
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, its characteristic is symplity.
There are many sorts of traditional Korean art.
One of them is famous of \"Samulnori \".
As you know, It is composed by four instrumentes.
It arouses exitement to all around world people.
강사 첨삭
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In my opinion, its characteristic is symplity.
>>> In my opinion, its characteristic is simplicity.
There are many sorts of traditional Korean art.
>>> correct
One of them is famous of \"Samulnori \".
One of them is famous of \"Samulnori \".
>>> One of them is famous for \"Samulnori \".
As you know, It is composed by four instrumentes.
As you know, It is composed by four instrumentes.
>>> As you know, It is composed of four instruments.
It arouses exitement to all around world people.
>>> It arouses excitement to all people around the world.
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