describe what your ideal daily work environment would look like
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I prefer the Charismatic leadership with clear vision. It allows me more concentrate on the process of the project.
I believe some part of work are better to work as a team, and some are better to work separately.
So I am going to put 60% for team work and 40% for individual work.
At first of work, when We decide the direction, it is better to have a team work, brainstorming together
For that process, we can get better ideas and also can have better understand of our goals. (30% for a team)
Once we deeply shared our goals, it is better to do work separately, I prefer divide the work into several parts and each take in charge or own part. (40% for individuals)
And Finally as a team, we review the project and make a feedback
(30% for a team)
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!^^
You\'re good in answering these 3 essay questions and let\'s talk about it later. Your thought are interesting!^_^
I prefer the Charismatic leadership with clear vision.
>>> I prefer a charismatic leadership with clear vision.
It allows me more concentrate on the process of the project.
>>>It allows me to concentrate more on the process of a project.
I believe some part of work are better to work as a team, and some are better to work separately.
>>>It allows me to concentrate more on the process of a project.
I believe some part of work are better to work as a team, and some are better to work separately.
>>>I believe it is better to work as a team in some parts, and some are better to work individually.
So I am going to put 60% for team work and 40% for individual work.
So I am going to put 60% for team work and 40% for individual work.
>>> So I put 60% for teamwork and 40% for individual work.
At first of work, when We decide the direction, it is better to have a team work, brainstorming together
At first of work, when We decide the direction, it is better to have a team work, brainstorming together
>>> At beginning of the work, we work together as a team when deciding the directions like brainstorming.
For that process, we can get better ideas and also can have better understand of our goals. (30% for a team)
>>> With that process, we can get better ideas and we can also have better understanding our goals. (That\'s 30% of teamwork.)
Once we deeply shared our goals, it is better to do work separately, I prefer divide the work into several parts and each take in charge or own part. (40% for individuals)
>>> With that process, we can get better ideas and we can also have better understanding our goals. (That\'s 30% of teamwork.)
Once we deeply shared our goals, it is better to do work separately, I prefer divide the work into several parts and each take in charge or own part. (40% for individuals)
>>> Once we deeply shared our goals, it is better to do the work separately. I prefer dividing the work into several parts and each can take in-charge or own a part. (That\'s 40% of individual work.)
And Finally as a team, we review the project and make a feedback (30% for a team)
And Finally as a team, we review the project and make a feedback (30% for a team)
>>>Finally, as a team, we review the project and make feedback. (That\'s another 30% of teamwork.)
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