Describe you learnt recently
학생이 쓴 원문
I am learning playing tennis, and the most interesting one in my life now is tennis. I started the sport 2 years ago with my husband and friends. The reasons why I started playing tennis was that I wanted to attend a tennis social club at my town and meet new friends. Finally, after I had tennis lessons with a tennis couch for 1 year, I entered the tennis club. I am happy that I can meet many different kinds of people at the club and I am able to listen to their daily life in Sydney. It is helpful for me to understand Sydney life.
The hardest thing of playing tennis is that I can not hit a ball freely with a racquet. I am still practicing tennis and am hoping to improve tennis skills.
I really recommend to learn playing tennis with your friends or family and it makes you closer with them. Also, tennis is good for health. If you need some exercises and looking for a sport for your health, that would be certainly tennis.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss. [Name]!
I hope you can meet more friends in your tennis club.
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I am learning playing tennis, and the most interesting one in my life now is tennis. I started the sport 2 years ago with my husband and friends. The reasons why I started playing tennis was that I wanted to attend a tennis social club at my town and meet new friends. Finally, after I had tennis lessons with a tennis couch for 1 year, I entered the tennis club. I am happy that I can meet many different kinds of people at the club and I am able to listen to their daily life in Sydney. It is helpful for me to understand Sydney life.
The hardest thing of playing tennis is that I can not hit a ball freely with a racquet. I am still practicing tennis and am hoping to improve tennis skills.
I really recommend to learn playing tennis with your friends or family and it makes you closer with them. Also, tennis is good for health. If you need some exercises and looking for a sport for your health, that would be certainly tennis.
The hardest thing of playing tennis is that I can not hit a ball freely with a racquet. I am still practicing tennis and am hoping to improve tennis skills.
I really recommend to learn playing tennis with your friends or family and it makes you closer with them. Also, tennis is good for health. If you need some exercises and looking for a sport for your health, that would be certainly tennis.
>> I am learning how to play tennis and it\'s the most interesting thing in my life now. I started this sport two years ago with my husband and friends. The reasons why I started to play tennis are to socialize with the people in my town and meet new friends. Finally, after having tennis lessons for one year, I joined the tennis club. I was happy to meet different kinds of people and listen about their daily life in Sydney. It was helpful for me to adapt with the kind of life here in Sydney. The hardest thing of playing tennis is I cannot hit the ball freely with a racket. I\'m still practicing and hoping to improve my skills in playing tennis. I really recommend tennis to my family and friends because it\'s also good for our health.
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