Describe your childhood home.
학생이 쓴 원문
My childhood home was small house and lived in countryside also there is little courtyard.
we lived near traditional maket and the maket opened every five days.
my mother sold various vegitabls
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! Your childhood home seemed cozy. I bet you made a lot of memories there when you were young. Thank you for answering your homework. Have a great Thursday!^^
~ T. Jewel
My childhood home was small house and lived in countryside also there is little courtyard.
>>My childhood home was a small house in the countryside with a little courtyard.
we lived near traditional maket and the maket opened every five days.
we lived near traditional maket and the maket opened every five days.
>>We lived near a traditional market that opened every five days.
my mother sold various vegitabls
my mother sold various vegitabls
>>My mother sold various vegetables.
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