Describe your Chu Seok exerperience
학생이 쓴 원문
My family member get together my house for having a great Chu Seok.
They bring some dishes like Jabche,Korean style pancake.
I prepare a big meal (not a dinner,)and buy some gift for a big event.
We give thanks to God for our happy time.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [이름] [이름]. It makes me hungry to imagine the food your prepared last Chu Seok.
T. Irene
My family member get together my house for having a great Chu Seok.
>>> My family members get together in my house to celebrate a great Chu Seok.
They bring some dishes like Jabche, Korean style pancake.
>>> Correct.
I prepare a big meal (not a dinner,)and buy some gift for a big event.
I prepare a big meal (not a dinner,)and buy some gift for a big event.
>>> I prepare a big meal (not dinner) and buy some gifts for the big event.
We give thanks to God for our happy time.
We give thanks to God for our happy time.
>>> Correct.
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