Describe your communication skills.

2018-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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I would like to tell you my communication skills are three things in brifly. First of all, when I meet someone, I would like to maintain good eye contact with them. In my opinion, the eyes are windows of the heart. so I am not try to afraid of that situation. Secondly,I think that listening as important as communication. It could be careful listening what someone's say. If I couldn't listen carefully, someone might be disappoint me even if I were good at the eye contact. Lastly, reacting properly, it seems very concertrate someone's story. I think a good reaction is nodding head and with a warm smile. It could be a very good conversation with anyon.

강사 첨삭

Mini!  ^_^ When you started writing again, you did so with vengeance. Ha ha ha.  Anyway, this is good for you. You can express a lot of your thoughts by writing.
~T. IRENE~
I would like to tell you my communication skills are three things in brifly.
>>> I would like to tell you about my communications skills in 3 brief points.
First of all, when I meet someone, I would like to maintain good eye contact with them.
>>> First of all, whenever I meet people, I usually look them in the eye and maintain eye contact.
In my opinion, the eyes are windows of the heart. so I am not try to afraid of that situation.
>>> In my opinion, the eyes are the windows of the heart so I try not to be afraid of that situation.
 Secondly,I think that listening as important as communication.
>>> Secondly, I think that listening is an important aspect/part of communication. 
It could be careful listening what someone\'s say.
>>> It means listening to what someone is saying.
If I couldn\'t listen carefully, someone might be disappoint me even if I were good at the eye contact.
>>> If I don\'t do that, the other person might become disappointed at me.
 Lastly, reacting properly, it seems very concertrate someone\'s story.

>>>  Lastly, responding properly/appropriately to someone\'s story.
I think a good reaction is nodding head and with a warm smile.
>>> I react by nodding my head and smiling warmly at the other person.
It could be a very good conversation with anyon.
>>> All these help me have a good conversation with anyone.

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