Describe your family.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I think, your homework is very simple. so it is very easy to understand what you want.
My family consist of 3 persons. there are my wife, my son and me.
My wife work as a nurse at University Hospital. My son study to enter the University in Seoul.
My family like to stay at home and eat some food by delivey, For example chicken and beer and cold noodle.
My wife want to sleep when she comes back from the hospital.
Our family alway get up early in the morning. Wake up time is 530 am.
In my case, I make a some food when I work at home due to Covid19.
My wife is ready to go to the hospital busily everyday.
My son also is ready to go to the academy for University.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]~
Don\'t worry, sometimes the questions I give is easy so that you won\'t be having a hard time answering them. I will still give you different questions. Anyway, thank you for answering your homework. Keep it up as always.
Don\'t worry, sometimes the questions I give is easy so that you won\'t be having a hard time answering them. I will still give you different questions. Anyway, thank you for answering your homework. Keep it up as always.
Here are your corrections:
I think, your homework is very simple.
>> CORRECT
so it is very easy to understand what you want.
My family consist of 3 persons. there are my wife, my son and me.
My wife work as a nurse at University Hospital. My son study to enter the University in Seoul.
My family like to stay at home and eat some food by delivey,
My wife want to sleep when she comes back from the hospital.
Our family alway get up early in the morning. Wake up time is 530 am.
In my case, I make a some food when I work at home due to Covid19.
My wife is ready to go to the hospital busily everyday.
My son also is ready to go to the academy for University.
>> It is very easy to understand and know what you want.
>> My family is consists of 3 persons. My wife, my son and I.
>> My wife works as a nurse at a University Hospital while my son is studying to enter the University in Seoul.
>> My family likes to stay at home and eat delivery food.
For example chicken and beer and cold noodle.
>> For example, chicken, cold noodles, and beer.
>> My wife wants to immediately sleep when she comes back home from the hospital.
>> Our family always gets up early in the morning. We wake up at 5:30 am.
>> In my case, I make some food when I work at home due to COVID19.
>> My wife is always ready to go to the hospital everyday.
>> My son is also ready to go to the academy for the University.
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