Describe your favorite city in South Korea
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- Teacher Sophia
I like Seoul in South Korea. I think the city has a very urban and traditional space at the same time.
>> I like the city of Seoul in South Korea. I think that the city has a very urban and traditional look at the same time.
Sometimes we can go to amusement park or we can see a various play in Seoul.
>> Sometimes, we can go to the amusement park or we can see a various of play in Seoul.
Otherwise, we can visit the historic places and taste the traditional food.
>> Otherwise, we can visit the historical places and taste the traditional Korean food.
If the COVID-19 totally disappear, I hope you to visit Seoul in South Korea.
>> If the COVID-19 totally disappear, I hope that you can visit Seoul in South Korea.
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