DESCRIBE YOUR FAVORITE FICTIONAL CHARACTER IN AS MUCH DETAIL AS POSSIBLE.

2017-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nova

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I have the character that i like it name is ned. It is my younger brother but itis funny so I think it is a character. In the book or movie I don't have a character that i like it so i wrie ned. he is also really fun so i like it. THIS IS ABOUT CHARACTER THAT I LIKE.

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I have the character that i like it name is ned.
>> The character that I like is Ned.
>> OR: I like the character of Ned.

It is my younger brother but itis funny so I think it is a character.
>> He is my younger brother and I think he is funny that is why I like him.
>> OR: Ned is my younger brother and I like him him because he is funny.

In the book or movie I don\'t have a character that i like it so i wrie ned.
>> I don\'t like any character in the book or movie.

he is also really fun so i like it.
>> Ned is also fun to be with.

THIS IS ABOUT CHARACTER THAT I LIKE.
>> This is the character that I like.

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