Describe your favorite food. What ingredients are in it? Why is it your favorite?
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My favorite food is Ddungcaron. Ddungcaron has a more creams inside macaron. In Korea, Ddungcaron\'s Ddung means \'many\'.
Because Ddungcaron is made by Korea. I hope so. So there is many creams inside. There is even more creams then macarons! My favorite Ddungcaron is Straw berry Ddungcaron! thanks :3
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My favorite food is Ddungcaron.
>> CORRECT!
Ddungcaron has a more creams inside macaron.
>> Ddungcaron has more cream inside than macaron.
In Korea, Ddungcaron\'s Ddung means \'many\'.
>> CORRECT!
Because Ddungcaron is made by Korea.
>> Because Ddungcaron is made in Korea.
OR> Because Ddungcaron is a product of Korea.
I hope so. So there is many creams inside.
>> I hope. it has more cream inside.
There is even more creams then macarons!
>> There is even more cream than macarons!
My favorite Ddungcaron is Straw berry Ddungcaron! thanks :3
>> My favorite Ddungcaron is the strawberry one. Thank you. :3
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