Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.

Good evening, Sir [이름]!

I hope that you are having a great weekend.

Thanks for sending in your composition.
I hope that you will have enough res tonight.

I am excited to talk to you.

Anyway, you are right! It is really relaxing going back to our hometown.

Whenever I go to my mother\'s hometown, I want to stay there for about four days.

If we only spent two days there, I feel like going back after two days. Hihihihi.

Hearing the birds chirping, the waves on the beach and so on.
It makes us feel renewed. Thanks for sharing about your favorite place.

Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina

When I was younger, I always wanted to go to cities because I lived in a small town in the country side.

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Now I have been living in the city for the last 35 years and I feel relaxed and free when I sometimes take a trip to rural areas.

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>> Better: I have been living in the city for the last 35 years now and I feel relaxed and free whenever I go on a trip to the rural areas.

When I go hiking and stall down a trail in the forest, I feel like I came my hometown.

>> Did you mean: When I go hiking and stroll down a trail in the forest, I feel like I went to my hometown.

>> OR:  When I go hiking and stroll down a trail in the forest, I feel like I came from my hometown.

I like my hometown.

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I used to visit it on New Year’s Day or thanks-giving day when my parents resided there.

>>  I used to visit there on New Year’s Day or Thanksgiving Day when my parents resided there.

>> OR: I used to go there on New Year’s Day or Thanksgiving Day when my parents were still living there.

However, I have not recently visited my hometown since my parents left and moved to Seoul.

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I often think about going there, but the long distance makes it not easy to go there as often as I wish.

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>> OR: I often think about going there, but the long distance makes it difficult to go there as often as I wish.

My hometown is located in the southern part of the Korean peninsula.

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It is surrounded by mountains and only less than 20 households are living now.

>> It is surrounded by mountains and only less than 20 households are living there now.

Most of them are over 60 years old and you can hardly see young kids.

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There are no marts in the town, neither any markets.

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They live on growing rice or cows.

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They are all farmers and always friendly, espeically to visitors.

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