Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible.
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays I enjoy to watching people who are walking through little park that is located in front of my office.
This season is one of best season to get a sun on the bench.
That’s why, every times was winter season, when I has a business trip to this country.
During that time I’m always felt uncomfortable to heavy cloud, it means in winter season there are raining season (not much heavy rain but there are heavy cloud at the time in winter season).
I remember that when I was counted how many days was cloudy day, it’s more two weeks!!!
So I felt happy when I was seen the sun shine, like a laser beam between heavy cloud.
So these days I try to enjoy the sun light and watching people are walking through the small park to spend my lunch time.
That place give me a peaceful, warm shine sun and warm wind, also I can see people’s natural behavior such as have a lunch in the park and rest in the bench.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
It is really nice to look around while you are on break because it is one way for us to relax.
I hope that you will have a great weekend!
~~T. Andrea
Nowadays I enjoy to watching people who are walking through little park that is located in front of my office.
>> Nowadays, I enjoy watching people who are walking at a small park in front of my office.
This season is one of best season to get a sun on the bench.
This season is one of best season to get a sun on the bench.
>> This season is one of the best seasons to sit on a bench and feel the sun on your skin.
That’s why, every times was winter season, when I has a business trip to this country.
That’s why, every times was winter season, when I has a business trip to this country.
>> That\'s why, i\'ts every time I have a business trip in this country, it is always their winter.
During that time I’m always felt uncomfortable to heavy cloud, it means in winter season there are raining season (not much heavy rain but there are heavy cloud at the time in winter season).
During that time I’m always felt uncomfortable to heavy cloud, it means in winter season there are raining season (not much heavy rain but there are heavy cloud at the time in winter season).
>> During those times, I always felt uncomfortable because of heavy clouds. This means, if it is there winter it is raining, though not that heavy but it rains almost everyday of winter.
I remember that when I was counted how many days was cloudy day, it’s more two weeks!!!
I remember that when I was counted how many days was cloudy day, it’s more two weeks!!!
>> I remembered counting the cloudy days, it\'s more than two weeks!!
So I felt happy when I was seen the sun shine, like a laser beam between heavy cloud.
So I felt happy when I was seen the sun shine, like a laser beam between heavy cloud.
>> So I felt happy when I saw the sun shining like a laser between the heavy clouds.
So these days I try to enjoy the sun light and watching people are walking through the small park to spend my lunch time.
So these days I try to enjoy the sun light and watching people are walking through the small park to spend my lunch time.
>> So these days I try to enjoy the sun light and watch people who walks through the small park to spend my lunch time.
That place give me a peaceful, warm shine sun and warm wind, also I can see people’s natural behavior such as have a lunch in the park and rest in the bench.
That place give me a peaceful, warm shine sun and warm wind, also I can see people’s natural behavior such as have a lunch in the park and rest in the bench.
>> That place gives me peace, warm sun shine and cool wind. I can also see people\'s routine like having lunch at the park and rest on the bench.
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