Describe your favorite place in as much detail as possible
학생이 쓴 원문
I enjoy go to cafe for drink some coffee and looking for cafe interior.
Recently beautiful cafe are making up in my surrounding
In my free time I tour around some cafe.
강사 첨삭
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I enjoy go to cafe for
drink some coffee and looking for cafe interior.
>>I enjoy going
to the cafe to drink some coffee. I also enjoy the ambiance.
Recently beautiful
cafe are making up in my surrounding
>>Recently,
there have been cafes in my neighborhood.
In my free time I tour
around some cafe.
>>In my free
time, I go around some cafes.
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