Describe your favorite place in detail.
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite place is the sea near by my home. If you walk for 5 minutes, you can see my favorite place. The biggest reason why do I like this place is it\'s silence and calm so you can hear only the sound of the waves. It heals me and makes it disappear even when I\'m stressed, so I can be stable. Also I can see the wonderful combination of brown and green because this place has a lot of reeds and grass. (Blue one is the sea.) Expecially . In summer, you can see the flowers !!Furthermore, I feel happy when I see the sun glittered on the surface of the sea. And I take a lot of picture whenever I go there. It\'s so beautiful. I think the most of people will agreed that, If they can see. However, sometimes It\'s hard going to there because It has a strong wind. Because of that, I recommend to check the strength of wind If you will go there.
강사 첨삭
Hey Sarah! You did an awesome job! The pictures are great as well. I would love to experience a relaxing place like this one. I\'d agree that this would remove all your stress. Thank you for sharing this with me! ^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
>> My favorite place is the sea near my home.
If you walk for 5 minutes, you can see my favorite place.
>> CORRECT
The biggest reason why do I like this place is it\'s silence and calm so you can hear only the sound of the waves.
>> The biggest reason why I like this place is its silent and calm atmosphere where you\'d only hear the sound of the waves.
It heals me and makes it disappear even when I\'m stressed, so I can be stable.
>> It heals me and makes my stress disappear which makes me stable.
Also I can see the wonderful combination of brown and green because this place has a lot of reeds and grass.
>> CORRECT
(Blue one is the sea.)
>> (The blue one is the sea.)
Expecially . In summer, you can see the flowers !!
>> Especially during the summer you\'d be able to see flowers!
Furthermore, I feel happy when I see the sun glittered on the surface of the sea.
>> CORRECT
And I take a lot of picture whenever I go there.
>> And I take a lot of pictures whenever I go there.
It\'s so beautiful.
>> CORRECT
I think the most of people will agreed that, If they can see.
>> I think most people would agree once they see it.
However, sometimes It\'s hard going to there because It has a strong wind.
>> However, it\'s difficult to go there sometimes because of the strong wind.
Because of that, I recommend to check the strength of wind If you will go there.
>> Because of that, I\'d recommend that you check the weather forecast before going there.
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