Describe your favorite type of weather.

2020-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

I like this kind of weather. The wind blows and the sunshine is fine. The sky is blue and high, and the weather smells like a tree in a forested place It would be fantastic. I am a golfer. There are four seasons in Korea, so spring and autumn are golf seasons. It is hot in summer. It’s cool where the forest is thick and the terrain is high. I go there and play golf. In the snowy winter, we go to another warm country. Because of Covid 19, I will not be able to leave this winter. Finding a good weather for golf and leaving for another country. I think it will be difficult this year. I avoid rain, wind, hot or cold Good days are the best days to exercise Perhaps everyone feels refreshed in good weather.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! The perfect weather is not always there but when we experience it, it is really special. I hope that you\'ll have more good days this year despite the pandemic. Enjoy your day!~~T.Dee

I like this kind of weather. The wind blows and the sunshine is fine.
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The sky is blue and high, and the weather smells like a tree in a forested place
>>The sky is blue and the clouds are high. The breeze smell with trees in a forested place.
It would be fantastic.
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I am a golfer.
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There are four seasons in Korea, so spring and autumn are golf seasons.
>>There are four seasons in Korea, spring and autumn are golf seasons.
It is hot in summer.
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It’s cool where the forest is thick and the terrain is high.
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I go there and play golf.
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In the snowy winter, we go to another warm country.
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Because of Covid 19, I will not be able to leave this winter.
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>>OR: Because of the pandemic, I will not be able to travel abroad this winter.
Finding a good weather for golf and leaving for another country.
>>I find good weather to play golf when I go to another country.
I think it will be difficult this year.
>>CORRECT!
I avoid rain, wind, hot or cold
>>I avoid rain, wind and extremely hot or cold weathers.
Good days are the best days to exercise
>>Good days are the best days to exercise for me.
Perhaps everyone feels refreshed in good weather.
>>Perhaps everyone feels refreshed when the weather is good.

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