Describe your first job interview.
학생이 쓴 원문
I didn’t have interview experience. But if i become about interview, when i success full the job, i will want to say. And at that time, what i really want to say is story that i can give pride someone. I will say, “You can do it, like me!”. And i will divulge success way.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]! I really love your personality. Well, inspiring others with your journey can be really rewarding.
~T. Jenna
I didn’t have interview experience.
>>I haven\'t had an interview experience yet.
But if i become about interview, when i success full the job, i will want to say.
>>But one day, when I experience it and succeed in getting a job, I would love to tell the story about it.
And at that time, what i really want to say is story that i can give pride someone.
>>And at that time, what I really want to say with pride is a story that can make someone inspired.
I will say, “You can do it, like me!”.
Correct, or
>>I\'ll proudly say, \'You can achieve it, just like I did!
And i will divulge success way.
>>And I will divulge the path to success.
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