Describe your first trip abroad

2023-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Mika

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Well, when I travel abroad to Australia with my friends, I still remember people who said \"Ching Chang Chong\". I didn\'t understand the meaning at that time. A few years later, I can understand it when I started to study in English. So, I thought \'Wow, it\'s the racism\' and I began to believe that there\'re only good people and things in the world. :)

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, Elic! You are interested in learning, listens attentively, and makes a solid effort to avoid distractions that could interrupt the learning process. You show responsibility and follows directions whenever they are given. Keep up the good work. AWESOME.


Well, when I travel abroad to Australia with my friends, I still remember people who said \"Ching Chang Chong\".
>>> Well, when I travel abroad to Australia with my friends, I still remember people who say \"Ching Chang Chong\".

I didn\'t understand the meaning at that time. 
>>> I didn\'t understand the meaning at the time.

 A few years later, I can understand it when I started to study in English.
>>> A few years later, I could understand it when I started to study in English.

So, I thought \'Wow, it\'s the racism\' and I began to believe that there\'re only good people and things in the world.
>>> So, I thought, \'Wow, it\'s the racism,\" and I began to believe that there are only good people and things in the world.

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