Describe your house.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
My house is the apartment. This APT live over 1000 family.
We have a central park in the APT. near by APT there is a small River and a way for warking & riding beside River.
My house has 4 rooms and 1living room and 1 kitchen.
I live with my wife & son here.
I have a big TV & referigerator. We also have lundry machine, Dry machine, clothes styler.
My house is 20 floors of the top in this APT.
So we can see all of the park in my APT.
I am very happy with my house.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]. Thank you for giving your efforts in doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. You did great so keep up the good work.
Here are your corrections:
My house is the apartment.
>> We are living in an apartment.
This APT live over 1000 family.
>> This apartment building has over 1000 family residence.
>> CORRECT
near by APT there is a small River and a way for warking & riding beside River.
>> Near the apartment is a small river with a sidewalk for walking and cycling.
>> Our apartment has 4 rooms, a living room and a kitchen.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT; refrigerator
We also have lundry machine, Dry machine, clothes styler.
>> We also have a laundry machine, dryer, and clothes styler.
>> Our apartment is located at the 20th floor of the building.
>> So, we can see the whole of the park in my apartment.
>> CORRECT
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