Describe your ideal bookstore.
학생이 쓴 원문
My ideal bookstore is \"Aladdin\" in Korea.
I usally read and buy Great people Exhibition in there, because I like Great people Exhibition and I can buy it at low price.
강사 첨삭
Hello again, Jimmy!
Here\'s another corrected composition. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as not putting a comma before the word \"because\". See you tomorrow!
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Jean~~
Describe your ideal bookstore.
My ideal bookstore is \"Aladdin\" in Korea.
>> CORRECT~~
I usally read and buy Great people Exhibition in there, because I like Great people Exhibition and I can buy it at low price.
>> I usually read and buy Great People Exhibition there because I like this book and I can buy it at a low price.
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