Describe your ideal job.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
Do you satisfy with your job?
Many people want to get a job that they hope.
But I am sorry, it is very difficult reality.
Do you remember my major of the Univetsity?
My major is the Korea literature.
But my job is the madical sales.
It is a complete different part between two majors.
My dream was to be a journalist.
But it was very difficult situation.
Many people who have very good brain try to this contest. I did not try this challenger because I have no self confidence.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]~
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. See you later in class.
Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. See you later in class.
Here are your corrections:
Do you satisfy with your job?
>> Are you satisfied with your job?
>> CORRECT
>> But it\'s difficult to get in reality.
>> Do you remember my major in the university?
>> My major was Korean Literature.
>> But my current job is medical sales.
>> It\'s definitely far from my major.
>> CORRECT
>> But it was very difficult.
>> People that are smart tried to compete in this field.
I did not try this challenger because I have no self confidence.
>> I didn\'t try to compete with them because I have no self confidence.
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