Describe your ideal supermarket.
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I think describ my ideal supermarket is very clean and fresh supermarket because it is very good.
So clean is very most important for supermarket.
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Describe your ideal supermarket.
I think describ my ideal supermarket is very clean and fresh supermarket because it is very good.
>> I think my ideal supermarket is super clean and fresh because it is very good that way.
So clean is very most important for supermarket.
>> Cleanliness is the most important for a supermarket.
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