Describe your most favorite weekend and why.
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually had a normal weekend but i sometimes had a special weekend. My favorite weekend is that going on a trip with girl friend in good weather.
when i was in Toronto, i went to Niagara Falls with my girl friend in the weekend. At that time, The weather was wonderful that it was the right sunshine and wind. We walked around Niagara and saw the beautiful view of Niagara. It was very impressive to me to travel with someone I like. I look forward to spending this weekend in Toronto. that also why i want to live in there.
I hope to have a more perfect weekend in the future.
강사 첨삭
Awesome stories Rodney!!! ^_^
>> I usually have a normal weekend but sometimes, I have special weekends.
My favorite weekend is that going on a trip with girl friend in good weather.
>> My favorite weekend is when I go on a trip with my girlfriend in a good weather.
when i was in Toronto, i went to Niagara Falls with my girl friend in the weekend.
>> When I was in Toronto, on one particular weekend, I went to Niagara Falls with my girlfriend.
At that time, The weather was wonderful that it was the right sunshine and wind.
>> At that time, the weather was wonderful. The ray of sunshine and the wind was just right.
We walked around Niagara and saw the beautiful view of Niagara.
>> We walked around Niagara and saw the beautiful view.
It was very impressive to me to travel with someone I like.
>> It was very impressive for me, and to travel with someone I like, was also awesome.
I look forward to spending this weekend in Toronto. that also why i want to live in there.
>> I am looking forward to spending this weekend in Toronto. That is also why I want to live there.
I hope to have a more perfect weekend in the future.
>> I hope to have more of a perfect weekend in the future.
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