Describe your most memorable holiday or vacation spot in as much detail as possible.

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The most memorable holiday is when I stayed in the U.S. for 6 weeks 4years ago.

>>>My most memorable holiday is when I stayed in the U.S.  4years ago for 6 weeks.

At that time there was my sister\'s graduation ceremony.

>>>At that time, it was my sister\'s graduation ceremony.

So I wanted to attend the ceremony because I thought it was very special to my sister.

>>> I wanted to attend the ceremony because I know it was very special to my sister.

 we visited to New York city, Las Vegas, Los Angeles and San Francisco.

>>> We visited to New York city, Las Vegas, Los Angeles and San Francisco.

 there are many tourist attractions such as Disneyland, Universal studio and Six flags magic mountain.

>>> There are many tourist attractions such as Disneyland, Universal Studio and Six Flags Magic Mountain.

Six flags magic mountain is a famous amusement [이름] because there are lots of the scariest rides and I love that kinds of rides.

>>>Six Flags Magic Mountain is a famous amusement [이름] because there are lots of the scariest rides and I love that kind of rides.

So I was really looking forward to going there since I made a plan for the day.

>>>So, I was really looking forward to going there since I made the plan for that day.

Anyway, my sister and I had so much fun while we traveling for 6 weeks.

>>>Anyway, my sister and I had so much fun while traveling for 6 weeks.

we had so many good experiences and made tons of fantastic memories.

>>>We had so many good experiences and made tons of fantastic memories.

That\'s why that was the most memorable holiday to me.

>>>That\'s why that was the most memorable holiday for me.