Describe your most memorable hotel meal experience. What made it special?
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When I was 15, my family went to Taiwan.
In the hotel, we ordered pasta and bread to room because we didn\'t have health to move.
Eating food and watching TV together in the warm hotel room was memorable for me.
Because I like to eat and play in room, not outside.
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Describe your most memorable hotel meal experience. What made it special?
When I was 15, my family went to Taiwan.
>>> OR: My family and I visited Taiwan when I was 15.
In the hotel, we ordered pasta and bread to room because we didn\'t have health to move.
>>> At the hotel, we had pasta and bread delivered to our room [이름]ce we didn’t have the energy to move.
Eating food and watching TV together in the warm hotel room was memorable for me. Because I like to eat and play in room, not outside.
>>> Eating and watching TV together in the cozy hotel room was a memorable experience for me because I prefer eating and playing indoors rather than outside.
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