Describe your neighbor you have had
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
As far as I know, most of Korean have no neighbor.
Because of COVID19. I can not meet them.
It is joke.
But I have no relationship with nerghbor actually.
Many People live apartment and they go to work early in the morning and come back home evening. so it is no chance to meet each other.
I had no chance to meet my nerghbor in front of my APT. almost during my 23 years.
When I want to talk someone, I call to my friend.
What I want to do everything can do without neighbor.
Why? within a few miniute, we can meet by fast transfortation and I can call by mobil phone every where. We live in 21C. It is not important to meet neighbor.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
As far as I know, most of Korean have no neighbor.
Because of COVID19. I can not meet them.
It is joke.
But I have no relationship with nerghbor actually.
Many People live apartment and they go to work early in the morning and come back home evening.
I had no chance to meet my nerghbor in front of my APT.
When I want to talk someone, I call to my friend.
What I want to do everything can do without neighbor.
Why? within a few miniute, we can meet by fast transfortation and I can call by mobil phone every where.
I appreciate your effort in writing a composition.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Dear [Name],
As far as I know, most of Korean have no neighbor.
>> As far as I know, most Koreans don\'t have neighbors.
Because of COVID19. I can not meet them.
>> CORRECT!
It is joke.
>> It is a joke.
But I have no relationship with nerghbor actually.
>> But I am not close to my neighbors actually.
Many People live apartment and they go to work early in the morning and come back home evening.
>> Many people live in an apartment and they go to work early in the morning and come back home in the evening.
so it is no chance to meet each other.
>> So, there\'s no chance for us to meet each other.
I had no chance to meet my nerghbor in front of my APT.
>> I also have no chance to meet my neighbor who lives in front of my apartment.
almost during my 23 years.
>> For almost 23 years of living here.
When I want to talk someone, I call to my friend.
>> When I want to talk to someone, I call my friend.
What I want to do everything can do without neighbor.
>> Whatever things I want to do, I can do it without a neighbor.
Why? within a few miniute, we can meet by fast transfortation and I can call by mobil phone every where.
>> Why? Because within a few minutes, my friends and I can meet with fast transportation and I can call them on my mobile phone everywhere.
We live in 21C. It is not important to meet neighbor.
>> We live in the 21st century and it\'s not important to meet and be friends with your neighbor.
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