Describe your understanding and motivation on the role of an analytics representative.

2022-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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The analytics department visits clients\' inquiries using Terminal and ensures clients find the most value from software through training and onboarding. Thus, the opportunity for tech-based client service and career progression at Bloomberg motivates me. My aspiration in client service is to prove the service\'s usefulness, which I would like to translate into the financial market with high-tech channels. Bloomberg rolls out analytical software, which representatives should be aware of. Then, representatives ensure clients achieve their end goal by clarifying ambiguity and complexity. This fast-paced and overarching experience motivates me. Alongside this, there is a long-term career aspiration in Bloomberg. I found it essential for any representative to be aware of Terminal and market-moving factors. Also, representatives have to navigate the customers\' pain points for future opportunities. I am interested in the analytics department, where I could learn from a client engagement.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for this Aciel!

The analytics department visits clients\' inquiries using Terminal and ensures clients find the most value from software through training and onboarding. 
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Thus, the opportunity for tech-based client service and career progression at Bloomberg motivates me. 
>>>  correct   
My aspiration in client service is to prove the service\'s usefulness, which I would like to translate into the financial market with high-tech channels. 
>>>  correct   
Bloomberg rolls out analytical software, which representatives should be aware of. 
>>> correct     
Then, representatives ensure clients achieve their end goal by clarifying ambiguity and complexity. 
>>> correct      
This fast-paced and overarching experience motivates me. 
>>> correct    
Alongside this, there is a long-term career aspiration in Bloomberg. 
>>>  correct    
I found it essential for any representative to be aware of Terminal and market-moving factors. 
>>> correct     
Also, representatives have to navigate the customers\' pain points for future opportunities. 
>>>  correct   
>>> OR: Also, representatives have to navigate the customers\' pain points for future references.
I am interested in the analytics department, where I could learn from a client engagement.
>>>   correct  

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