Describe yourself in three words and explain why.

2021-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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independence. I love working alone. So I chose freelancer position. learn. I like to learning new things. care These days I concentrate about \"care\". I have feel responsible about care may parents, family, and me.

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much, [이름]! It\'s good that you can easily describe yourself which means that you know yourself well. Keep up the good work! -Faith-

independence.

>> Independent
I love working alone.

>> CORRECT

OR: I love to work independently.

So I chose freelancer position.

>> So, I chose a freelancer position.
learn.

>> Philomath
I like to learning new things.

>> I like to learn new things.
care

>> Caring
These days I concentrate about \"care\".

>> These days, I concentrate on \"caring others.\"

I have feel responsible about care may parents, family, and me.

>> I have to be responsible by caring about my parents, family, and myself.

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