Describe yourself using eight sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I was born and raised in Jeju island.
I spent my youth in Jeju Island.
I have lived in Seoul since I retired from public office.
He enjoys his second career
I have hobbies such as tennis, golf, and mountain climbing.
Now, studying English has become my hobby.
My granddaughter is having a different fun as she is born.
Now is the happiest moment in my life.
강사 첨삭
Wow, what a wonderful life. ^^
I spent my youth in Jeju Island.
I have lived in Seoul since I retired from public office.
He enjoys his second career
Now, studying English has become my hobby.
My granddaughter is having a different fun as she is born.
Thank you, John!
I hope you have a fulfilling life ahead.
~t.Ally
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I was born and raised in Jeju island.
>> CORRECT!
I spent my youth in Jeju Island.
>> CORRECT!
I have lived in Seoul since I retired from public office.
>> CORRECT!
He enjoys his second career
>> I am currently enjoying my second career.
I have hobbies such as tennis, golf, and mountain climbing.
>> CORRECT!
Now, studying English has become my hobby.
>> CORRECT!
My granddaughter is having a different fun as she is born.
>> My granddaughter is having a different kind of fun since she was born.
Now is the happiest moment in my life.
>> CORRECT!
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