Describing the main traditions of the Korean New Year and explaining why they are important.
학생이 쓴 원문
During Korean New Years day, we eat Ddoek-guk that is a rice cake soup.
This soup means getting one age more.
Koreans also take bow to their parents.
It means greeting of new year.
After bow, parents give their children money.
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During Korean New Years day, we eat Ddoek-guk that is a rice cake soup.
>> During Korean New Year’s Day, we eat Ddeok-guk, which is a rice cake soup.
This soup means getting one age more.
>> Eating this soup symbolizes gaining one year in age.
Koreans also take bow to their parents. It means greeting of new year.
>> Koreans also perform a bow to their parents, which is a traditional New Year greeting.
After bow, parents give their children money.
>> After the bow, parents give their children money as a gift.
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