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2011-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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Most of the center had a problem to set up the phone line for data transmission of both study. (HZC112206, HZA113091 study) Could you let us know how to avoid this issue and set a phone line prior to study initiation? We had difficulty in data transfer problem/connectivity at the time of study initiation. Please let us know to instruct all the site during central investigator meeting. As well, please advise the site to have the masterscope available and connected to the analogue line to install the calling card remotely while out of order. We thought the calling cards are with a different provider so this usually take care of the issue. Please set the equipment not to unresolved the problem at the time of study initiation. (i,e : Back up plan setting, calling card)

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Hi, Miss. [Name]! Inspired to write again? Bring it on! You are very much welcome to do so. It’s a good way to practice your English writing and vocabulary skills. Enjoy it! The following is your corrected composition;   Most of the center had a problem to set up the phone line for data transmission of both study. (HZC112206, HZA113091 study)  >>Most centers have a common problem when it comes to setting up the phone line for data transmission for both HZC112206, HZA113091 study. Could you let us know how to avoid this issue and set a phone line prior to study initiation? >>correct We had difficulty in data transfer problem/connectivity at the time of study initiation. >>correct Please let us know to instruct all the site during central investigator meeting. >>Please provide us a complete instruction about the site to be used in our central investigation meeting. As well, please advise the site to have the masterscope available and connected to the analogue line to install the calling card remotely while out of order. >>In addition to it, advise the site staff to prepare the master scope to be available and be connected to the analogue line. This could help in easy installment of the calling card especially if out of order. We thought the calling cards are with a different provider so this usually take care of the issue. >>We are thinking that the calling cards depend on the provider that usually takes care of the issue. Please set the equipment not to unresolved the problem at the time of study initiation. (i,e : Back up plan setting, calling card) >>Please set the equipment up like back up plan setting or calling card that is needed to resolve the problem in time of study.

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