Design and describe a small island that would be perfect escape for ou for a few days. H/W

I designed a small island. There are many things to enjoy a few days. First, there has many foods which are meats, noodle, pizza, chicken, rice, rice cake, etc that I like. Second, there has a gym, basket ball ring, soccer goal post, and ground. I can play basketball and soccer in island. Third, in there, the computer is set. So, I can play computer game such as LoL, FIFA, or other things which I want to enjoy. If I went to the island, it would be awesome! Barba, I want to hear your advice about these questions. 1. I hear reading english books help me improve my english skills. So, How do you think about reading english book? And what is the great method of reading english? 2. I know previewing and reviewing power english is important. But, I don't know how to preview and review it. So, can you tell me how can I review and preview? I'm very sorry to question and ask you to fix my writing in a late night... Sorry

Happy Friday [이름]!   Thank you for sending your composition. I appreciate your effort and time doing it.   Here is a helpful tip for you:   1. Try to use English whenever you  can. Doing this will make you feel more comfortable and confident using this language. And of couse to help you out with your grammar.   2. Enjoying English movies, dramas, series, etc. or listening to English songs. This enhance your listening skills and you could also learn new idioms and expressions.  3. Reading any  interesting  English magazines, newspaper, novels , etc. for you.  This will also widen your vocabulary.   I hope this tips will be very helpful to you! Anyway, have a great weekend and stay safe!   T. Barbara**,   I designed a small island. >> Correct! OR: >> I already designed a small island. There are many things to enjoy a few days. >> There are many things to enjoy for a few days. First, there has many foods which are meats, noodle, pizza, chicken, rice, rice cake, etc that I like. >> First, there are many foods such as meat, noodles, pizza, chicken, rice, rice cake etc. that I like to eat. Second, there has a gym, basket ball ring, soccer goal post, and ground. >> Second, there is a gym, a baketball ring, a soccer goal post and a ground. I can play basketball and soccer in island. >> I can play basketball and soccer in the island. Third, in there, the computer is set. >> Third, there should be a computer set. So, I can play computer game such as LoL, FIFA, or other things which I want to enjoy. >> So, I can play a computer game such as LOL, FIFA or other things which I enjoy. If I went to the island, it would be awesome! >> If I will go to the island, it would be awesome!Barba, I want to hear your advice about these questions.>> Teacher Barbara, I want to listen to your opinion about these questions.1. I hear reading english books help me improve my english skills. >> I heard that reading English books will help improve my English skills. So, How do you think about reading english book? >> So, what do you think about reading English books? And what is the great method of reading english? >> And what is the great method of reading English books?2. I know previewing and reviewing power english is important. >> I know that previewing and reviewing in Power English is important. But, I don\'t know how to preview and review it. >> But I don\'t know how to preview and review. So, can you tell me how can I review and preview?>> Correct! OR:>> So, can you suggest me ways on how to improve my skills in English?I\'m very sorry to question and ask you to fix my writing in a late night... Sorry >> I\'m very sorry to ask you about it and to correct my writing late night... Sorry.