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It is certainly true that many people in modern society have the opportunity of free schooling and they could become literacy and numeracy.

>> It is certainly true that many people in modern society have the opportunity of free schooling and they could become literate and numerate.

There are several drawbacks for this situation and various measures could be taken by government to improve this problem.
>> There are several drawbacks to this situation and various measures could be taken by the government to solve this problem.
There are two bad effects caused by the lack of literacy.

>> There are two bad effects caused by lack of literacy.

One of the main problems is that many adults could get be difficult in their work place.

>> One of the problems is that many adults will have difficulty doing their jobs.

They are required literacy and numeracy for given job from their employments.

>> Literacy and numeracy are required for a given job from their employers.

However people who lack literacy and numeracy can not solve their job themselves.

>> However people who lack literacy and numeracy cannot handle their jobs themselves.

Another problem is that many adults could not live comfortable life.

>> Another problem is that many adults could not live a comfortable life.

This is because if they lack to solve and understand ability for some problems they could not gain better jab.

>> This is because if they lack the ability to understand and solve some problems, they could not get a better job.

This means that they could not earn a high salary than those have literacy and numeracy.
>> This means that they could not earn a high salary unlike those who are literate and numerate.
On the other hand, there are several measures by government to solve these drawback.

>> On the other hand, the government can provide several measures to solve these drawbacks.

Firstly, government should build a lot of deucation place such as libraries, cultural place to teach them.

>> Firstly, the government should build more facilities such as libraries and cultural places where people can learn and study.

State should offer the opportunity of free schooling to many adults.

>> Different states should offer free schooling to many adults.

Secondly, government should encourage many companies to offer regular working time and hoidays to their employees.

>> Secondly, the government should encourage many companies to offer regular working time and holidays to their employees.

As a result if many adults have free time in daily life, they will can improve their literacy and numeracy.
>> As a result if many adults have free time in their daily life, they will improve their literacy and numeracy.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although many adults have the difficults with their fewer ability, there are certain measures could be taken by government to solve thses situation.

>> In conclusion, it seems to me that although many adults have difficulties in developing their abilities, there are certain measures that can be taken by the government to solve this situation.