Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should w

The number of smokers in the world is really alarming, not to mention the danger of its effects TT

One of the senators in the Philippines even died of lung cancer without smoking a single cigarette.

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I don’t smoke so I can’t understand why people do cigarette although it harms their body.

>>I don’t smoke so I can’t understand why people buy cigarettes although it harms their body.

 Moreover, it can give damages to the others nearby them.

>> Moreover, it can give damages to the others near them.

That’s why we concern about this since we don’t like to get harm from them.

>>We are concerned about this since we don’t like to get harm from them.

Honestly, if they do it in closed area without non-smoker, I don’t mind whether they smoke or not.

>>Honestly, if they do it in a closed area without a non-smoker, I don’t mind whether they smoke or not.
However most of smokers don’t consider the others feeling thus I think it’s kind of selfish.

>>However most smokers don’t consider others\' feeling; thus, I think it’s kind of selfish.
Anyway, I can’t stand to be with the person who is a smoker.

>>Anyway, I can’t stand to be with a person who is a smoker.

Fortunately, smokers have been being reduced in Korea since the price of the cigarette had been increased by the government.

>>CORRECT!

And I have an idea to be able to decrease them.

>>Furthermore, I have an idea to be able to decrease them.

 If cigarette only can buy in the police office, they must go there to get it.

>> If a cigarette can only be bought in the police office, they must go there to get it.

And they might feel guilty even if they don’t do anything.

>>CORRECT!

Furthermore, the rating of the student smoking might be declined by this system since they can’t buy it.

>>Furthermore, the rating of student smokers might be declined by this system since they can’t buy it.