Desribe any of one day schedule.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
I would like to let you know my today schedule.
Today I got up early 5:30am in the morning.
I cleaned my living room and collected some food waste and diposed it in waste bottle.
I made some food for my son. Roasted meat and made a egg fried and boilded some soup.
After brackfast, I got shower in restroom and wear the suit and went to KTX station for business trip.
Now I staye in Jeonbuk Univ. Hospital.
I met some customer and distributor.
After 30 minute, I am going to return to Kangmyong station.
My car was parked in KTX station. When I arrive there I will drive my car to my home.
Due to COVID19, I can not return my company as a rule of Virus protect action.
After arrive ht home, I will check my e mail and I will make a list of potential customer for 2021.
Today morning, I received the request of sales plan 2021.
After that, I will eat some food with my wife. My wife come back at 6:00 pm.
A little rest time, I am going to talk you by phone.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Great job on your composition. Thank you for sparing some time to do your homework. Keep up the good work. See you later! Have a great day.
Great job on your composition. Thank you for sparing some time to do your homework. Keep up the good work. See you later! Have a great day.
I would like to let you know my today schedule.
>> I would like to let you know of my schedule today.
Today I got up early 5:30am in the morning.
>> Today, I got up early at 5:30 am.
>> I cleaned my living room then collected some food waste and disposed it in a bin.
>> CORRECT
Roasted meat and made a egg fried and boilded some soup.
>> I prepared roasted meat, fried egg and soup.
>> After breakfast, I took a shower, wear my suit and went to KTX station for a business trip.
>> I am currently at Jeonbuk University Hospital.
I met some customer and distributor.
>> I met some customers and distributors.
>> After 30 minutes, I will be returning to Kangmyong station.
>> CORRECT
When I arrive there I will drive my car to my home.
>> CORRECT
>> Due to COVID19, I cannot go to my company due to a policy to protect us from the virus.
>> After arriving home, I will check my email and I will make a list of potential customers for 2021.
>> This morning, I received the sales request plan for 2021.
>> CORRECT
My wife come back at 6:00 pm.
>> My wife will be back at 6:00 pm.
>> I will have a short rest then have a class with you by phone.
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