Dessert
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Umm... I don\'t like it much.
But, my wife is very like it.
So, I often eat some dessert.
Among the many dessert, I most like chocolate.
Because chocolate is supplied sugar.
So, I eat chocolate when my energy low.
But very sweet chocolate don\'t eat.
I hate very sweet chocolate and milk chocolate.
I just eat dark chocolate.
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Hi Matthew!^^
Because chocolate is supplied sugar.
So, I eat chocolate when my energy low.
But very sweet chocolate don\'t eat.
I hate very sweet chocolate and milk chocolate.
I just eat dark chocolate.
Chocolate has always been my favorite dessert.
However, there days, I am no longer a fan of sweets.
When my students give me chocolates, I usually give the it other people.
I know that it is not a good habit but it is better than it being
Andrea
Umm... I don\'t like it much. But, my wife is very like it.
>> Uhm, I do not like it that much but my wife does.
So, I often eat some dessert.
>> Correct
Among the many dessert, I most like chocolate.
>> Among all the desserts, I like chocolate the most.
Because chocolate is supplied sugar.
>> Chocolate is full of sugar.
So, I eat chocolate when my energy low.
>> So I eat chocolate when my energy is low.
But very sweet chocolate don\'t eat.
>> However, I do not eat chocolates that are too sweet.
I hate very sweet chocolate and milk chocolate.
>> I hate very sweet and milk chocolate.
I just eat dark chocolate.
>> Correct
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