Dessert gives me comfort
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually feel very happy and satisfied after having dessert. Sweet food always makes me feel better, especially after a long or stressful day.
When I eat something like chocolate cake and ice cream, it instantly lifts my mood.
I also enjoy having dessert with a cup of coffee, because it makes the moment feel special and relaxing. Sometimes, I feel a little guilty if I eat too much suger, so I try to enjoy it in moderation.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! That’s such a sweet story! I completely understand, dessert and coffee are such a comforting combo. It’s nice that you enjoy them mindfully too!
-T. Sonny
I usually feel very happy and satisfied after having dessert.
>>Correct!
OR. I always feel happy and content after having dessert.
Sweet food always makes me feel better, especially after a long or stressful day.
>>Correct!
OR. Sweet treats lift my spirits, especially after a long or stressful day.
When I eat something like chocolate cake and ice cream, it instantly lifts my mood.
When I eat something like chocolate cake and ice cream, it instantly lifts my mood.
>>Correct!
I also enjoy having dessert with a cup of coffee, because it makes the moment feel special and relaxing.
>>Correct!I also enjoy having dessert with a cup of coffee, because it makes the moment feel special and relaxing.
Sometimes, I feel a little guilty if I eat too much suger, so I try to enjoy it in moderation.
>>Sometimes, I feel a little guilty if I eat too much sugar, so I try to enjoy it in moderation.
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